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Category: SCREENWRITER’S UTOPIA (page 2 of 2)

Susan’s Screenwriter’s Utopia Top Treatment Tips article

 

http://www.screenwritersutopia.com/article/c5e408b6

 

What is a treatment?

A treatment is a detailed overview of a script idea or screenplay, which is used as a marketing tool for both spec and for-hire screenwriters to sell their project. While treatments and synopses are both marketing tools to sell a screenplay or script idea, there are differences. A synopsis is generally one-page only and includes only the main plot points or your screenplay, while a  treatment is a more comprehensive and detailed overview of your script.

Do you really need to write a treatment?

It depends on the scenario.  It’s not really necessary to write a treatment unless it assists you in fleshing out your ideas and developing your screenplay. Studios, production companies and/or industry folks might request you submit a treatment to them after you pitch an idea and they are interested in your project.  They will tell you approximately how many pages to write for the treatment.

Top Ten Treatment Tips

  1. Your goal is to entice and excite the executive to want to see this treatment made into a movie. This also means that your writing talent and distinct voice shines through.
  2. Write your treatment in prose form and in the present tense.
  3. Make sure that you consistently follow the conventions of your script’s genre.
  4. Follow your main character’s journey and the major plot points. Indicate your protagonist’s goal and the major obstacles in his or her path, including the antagonist.
  5. Include dialogue snippets (using quotation marks) only when absolutely necessary to highlight a poignant or critical moment of your script.
  6. Your treatment should be a clear and accurate reflection of your script idea and/or screenplay.

To read more go to:

http://www.screenwritersutopia.com/article/c5e408b6

Susan’s ‘Top Tips about Antagonists: How to Make the Film Executive Love to Hate Your Antagonist’

Photo…Eve Harrington in All About Eve

Direct link to this article in Screenwriters Utopia: http://www.screenwritersutopia.com/article/e6879136

Why do we love to hate antagonists?  In a successfully crafted antagonist the reasons are clear — we understand their motives, we somehow relate to their actions, and we are drawn in because they are so plausible that we cannot believe what they are doing to achieve their goals.

Often known as the villain, the antagonist is the character whose objective is to prevent the protagonist from achieving his or her goal. However, antagonists do not have to be villains — (‘the bad guys’) — but they must demonstrate some type of opposition to the protagonist’s goals.

Film executives must empathize with your antagonist.  This doesn’t need mean sympathize — they must feel something for them such as hate, disdain, outrage, and disgust. Readers can disagree with the means by which your antagonist is going about taking action against the protagonist, but they should understand or even relate to why he or she is doing so.

Let’s turn the clock back to 1950 and the film All About Eve written and directed by Joseph L. Mankiewicz. Why do we love to hate Eve Harrington? We are drawn into this memorable antagonist not only because she is duplicitous, scheming, and lies about her true identity, but she is smart, charming, and her goal to become a Broadway star is surprisingly realistic — she is a talented actress.  Eve will stop at nothing to achieve her goal — to become a bigger star than protagonist Margo Channing, who — eventually catching on to Eve’s intentions — leads to one of the film’s most famous line spoken by Margo: “Fasten your seatbelts, it’s going to be a bumpy night.”

Here are some tips for bringing out the best of your antagonists in your screenplay:

Top Tips

  • Avoiding one-dimensional or stereotypical antagonists will help you to avoid your script getting rejected.
  • Create empathetic, multi-dimensional antagonists whose motivations and behaviors are clear and plausible within the context of the plot.
  • Establish what’s at stake for your antagonist, and what he or she gains by succeeding in achieving his or her goal.
  • Antagonists who are emotionally complex, mysterious, flawed, vulnerable, and/or have a sense of humor are engaging to readers.
  • The antagonist’s true identity can be revealed in any act of your screenplay; however it’s best to establish the antagonist’s goals and intentions in Act 1 to raise the stakes in your protagonist’s journey.
  • Generally, antagonists are the ones who receive their punishment or retribution by the script’s climax. (For example: The Wicked Witch of the West in The Wizard of Oz.)
  • Fully develop your antagonist’s character arc.

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Susan’s Top Ten Tips about Writing Minor Characters in Screenwriter’s Utopia

Minor characters are the small yet important characters in a screenplay.  Don’t short change them; take the time developing them.  They must be as distinct and as interesting as your major characters.

Read my top ten tips for bringing out the best of your supporting people in your screenplay.  http://www.screenwritersutopia.com/article/baeb8c80

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